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Post by RyanCummings on 1st December 2012, 10:38 pm

Hey everyone! Let me tell you what this Christmas Carol rewrite is all about. Okay, first, each day between now and Christmas, There will be a Christmas carol name posted on here. Your job is to post your rewrite, and the new title of your rewrite. The best rewrite each day gets 15 seashells!

Example: Today’s song is Mary had a Little Lamb.

Example Entry: My song is titled, *Barclays*

Donna had a little cat.
Little cat
Little cat.
Donna had a little cat
Ferguson was his name.

Songs rewrites will be judged on

1. Creativity/originality
2. Rhyming/rhythm
3. and content.

It doesn't have to be about AIO (even though that would be awesome), it can be about anything you want, as long as it isn’t inappropriate or anything like that. And make sure that your syllables and verse lines match up with the original song . So I will start this topic out with....

Carol of the Bells! Go to this link to see the actual song on Youtube if you have never heard it.

Okay, GO!


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Post by Jason on 2nd December 2012, 12:11 am

My song is titled: Carol of the SNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Look to the left
Now to the right
See all the snow
The pretty snow
Winter is here
Making me smile
To everyone
Oh now they smile

Oh yes, Oh yes
Snow everywhere
Ice everywhere
Oh could I fall
No I shan't fall
Words of good mood
Oh I love snow!
OH I LOVE SNOW!

Oh how it falls,
harder it falls,
O'er hill and field,
on house and child,
While I am glad
Some people sad
Songs of good cheer
Sir SNOW is here!
Really really really glad it's snowing
Really really really glad it's snowing

More snow to send
On without end
A joyful tone
In most ev'ry home

[Repeat from the beginning as many times as feel led]

Oh yes, oh yes.


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Post by RyanCummings on 4th December 2012, 4:42 pm

Okay, Jason has won the 1st Christmas Carol Rewrite! Onto the 2nd. The next one is...

JINGLE BELLS!


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Post by Sunshine on 4th December 2012, 9:29 pm

Larkspur and I wrote this one a year or two ago, so does it count...? Think

Dashing through the woods,
with a rifle on your back.
Got the Thanksgiving turkey,
and the cranberry sauce.
Got the pumpkin pie,
and the whipped cream,
Cause' we're about to have
a Thanksgiving feast!

Oh, cranberry sauce,
corn on the cob, mash potatoes too!
Thank You, God, oh thank You God
for everything You do!

Oh, cranberry sauce,
corn on the cob, mash potatoes too!
Thank You, God, oh thank You God
for everything You do!
Come to think of it, TKD helped with the chorus too. Smile


And Ryan - it is okay that I'm entering since I'm an admin and all, right? O:)


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Post by Larkspur on 4th December 2012, 9:31 pm

Sunny and I wrote this together sometime in the past year (does it still count??). It's a play on our cat, Bella's name "Is-a-Bella."

Dashing down the hall
Chasing after her ball
Jumping over a box
Slipping over some socks.

Her collar (tags) can be heard
Some think it's quite absurd
But oh what fun it is to jingle
Because she Is-a-Bella!

Jingle Bella, jingle Bella
She jingles all the way.
Oh what fun it is to jingle
Because she Is-a-Bella

Jingle Bella, jingle Bella
She jingles all the way.
Oh what fun it is to jingle
Because she Is-a-Bell-a!


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Post by RyanCummings on 4th December 2012, 10:45 pm

Sunshine wrote:Larkspur and I wrote this one a year or two ago, so does it count...? Think

Anyone can enter, and any entries are okay, as long as they fit the requirements in the rules section. Smile


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Post by Jason on 5th December 2012, 4:07 pm

In only ninish days
I get to see my pup
Finals will be o'er
and I'll be eating nuts
If snow is on the ground
A sled ride i will take
down the hill and round the farm
to the cemeteries gates

Oh going down going down
Roughness all the way
Oh, what fun it is to ride
In a one person sled -di- eh?
faster down faster now
my speed is picking up
Oh, what fun it is to ride
down a hill in December hey!


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Post by RyanCummings on 11th December 2012, 2:27 pm

Okay, Larkspur won that one! The next carol is... 12 Days of Christmas! GO!


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Post by Larkspur on 11th December 2012, 11:01 pm

Gah! I don't have any creativity today for this Christmas carol rewrite! I can't think of anything!!


#annoyed


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Post by RyanCummings on 19th December 2012, 12:47 pm

And...the award for this Christmas carol rewrite goes to Austin Peachey, because he has been releasing his own version on his Facebook page. It doesn't really count because he doesn't come on this forum, but it is all we have.

Okay, the next carol is....LET IT SNOW!


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