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Humby's Poetry
by Humby 4th October 2013, 9:05 pm
The Butterfly Dance
by Brianna Chiles
I looked at his hand as he asked me to dance
For hours I'd longed and now was my chance
I shook my head shyly and said, "No, I can't."
He took my hand wryly and said, "Yes you can.
"Just follow the butterflies up in the trees
"They don't tap or sway, but fly with the breeze."
My gaze shifted upwards then became entranced
How simple, yet thrilling, a butterfly's dance
The delicacy yet purpose, each flutter of wing
The childlike majesty left me gasping
"How do you dance like the butterflies do?"
"First you circle me then I'll circle you."
I glanced back up at the yellow romantics
A hard act to follow if you add the antics
Never once did we touch, 'twas a butterfly dance
Yet it did feel as such, 'twas a butterfly's romance.
August 21, 2013
by Brianna Chiles
I looked at his hand as he asked me to dance
For hours I'd longed and now was my chance
I shook my head shyly and said, "No, I can't."
He took my hand wryly and said, "Yes you can.
"Just follow the butterflies up in the trees
"They don't tap or sway, but fly with the breeze."
My gaze shifted upwards then became entranced
How simple, yet thrilling, a butterfly's dance
The delicacy yet purpose, each flutter of wing
The childlike majesty left me gasping
"How do you dance like the butterflies do?"
"First you circle me then I'll circle you."
I glanced back up at the yellow romantics
A hard act to follow if you add the antics
Never once did we touch, 'twas a butterfly dance
Yet it did feel as such, 'twas a butterfly's romance.
August 21, 2013
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Re: Humby's Poetry
by IrishTiger 4th October 2013, 9:09 pm
Awwww!!!! I love it!!! So cool!!! Thanks for sharing. 
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Re: Humby's Poetry
by Sunshine 5th October 2013, 9:36 am
Very nicely written, Humby! 
You should post more, soon. =)
You should post more, soon. =)
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Re: Humby's Poetry
by Humby 5th October 2013, 1:04 pm
Sit Still, My Daughter
by Brianna Chiles
He's asked me to wait, with His wisdom respected
To leave all to Him
But such dreams I've collected!
How can His way be better than mine?
A question that doesn't make sense
Yet all think from time to time
It will become obvious if we just wait and see
And, granted, it's hard
But perhaps it should be
To just sail through life, given all that we asked for?
No surprises to excite
Just insistence to have more?
Though we don't like to admit it, God does know what's best
Sometimes it's painful
But that's part of His test
The thought of a test sometimes is frightening
What must I do, or not do?
And answers at times are less than enlightening
To ponder is fine and questions are good
Wait though for action
God will reply as only God could.
(I forget when I wrote this one)
by Brianna Chiles
He's asked me to wait, with His wisdom respected
To leave all to Him
But such dreams I've collected!
How can His way be better than mine?
A question that doesn't make sense
Yet all think from time to time
It will become obvious if we just wait and see
And, granted, it's hard
But perhaps it should be
To just sail through life, given all that we asked for?
No surprises to excite
Just insistence to have more?
Though we don't like to admit it, God does know what's best
Sometimes it's painful
But that's part of His test
The thought of a test sometimes is frightening
What must I do, or not do?
And answers at times are less than enlightening
To ponder is fine and questions are good
Wait though for action
God will reply as only God could.
(I forget when I wrote this one)
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Re: Humby's Poetry
by Renae 5th October 2013, 6:59 pm
WOW. Beautiful, Humby!
Very very good! Truly inspiring!
Very very good! Truly inspiring!
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Re: Humby's Poetry
by Sunshine 5th October 2013, 7:40 pm
Very nice, Humby. I especially like the last line, "God will reply as only God could."
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Re: Humby's Poetry
by IrishTiger 5th October 2013, 8:05 pm
I really like this one, Humby. 
thanks for sharing.
thanks for sharing.
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Re: Humby's Poetry
by Thor's Hammer 7th October 2013, 12:25 pm
They are good the first one sappy but good.
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